It works for me.
Lupin said, "I watched you cross the grounds and enter Hahrid's hut. Twenty minutes later, you left Hagrid, and set off back toward the castle. But you were now accompanied by someone else... I couldn't believe my eyes... And then I saw another dot, moving fast toward you, labeled Siriujs Black... I saw him collide with you; I watched as he pulled two of you into the Whomping Willow...""
At this point, apparently, Lupin left his office and hurried down to the Willow.
Round Two:
H&H2 were in the broom closet in the deserted entrance hall when they heard the Trio pass and go down the front steps...
"If anyone's looking out of the window --" Hermione squeaked, looking up at the castle behind them.
"We'll run for it," said Harry determinedly. "Straight into the forrest, all right? We'll have to hide behind a tree or something and keep a lookout --"
"Ok, but we'll go around by the greenhouses!" said Hermione breathlesly. "We need to keep out of sight of Harid's front door, or we'll see us..."
...skirting around the Whomping Willow, tearing toward the shelter of the forrest...
H&H2 got to Hagrid's first. They took the longer route, but they ran the whole way. Lupin's focus was on the Trio and he didn't think to look at the other route. While the Trio were inside, H&H2 were mostly holding still -- again, no reason for Lupin to look for them.
The action began as the Trio was leaving Hagrid's.
Lupin would have been watching the Trio while H&H2 were stealing Buckbeak.
They finished that job in time to see Ron throw off the cloak and chase Scabbers.
Sirius came into the picture and dragged Ron and Scabbers into the Willow.
Beyond that point, Lupin doesn't seem to have the Map.
I think the story works, with just a little luck.
My big question is:
Why didn't Harry see Peter on the Map?
He received the Map from Fred & George on the last weekend before their Christmas break.
Scabbers faked his death around February -- not that it matters -- the Marauder's Map covers Hagrid's Hut.
The day they met Sirius and Peter was on the day of their last exam in June.
In all those months, and he never once looked at Ron? How could he have missed Scabbers? |