Hi Desi ....
Welcome to HPC.
You write very well ...I hope to read something you've written in fanficton soon or perhaps in a play in the RPG.Your vivid description of things shows great imagination and creativity ...just what you need to write!
I hope you enjoy yourself as you find your way through Harry Potter Chat which is more of a community than a chatsite. I think there are people here that you'll enjoy meeting.
Have fun.
Shirli